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February 13th, 2012

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02:24 am - Anyone want to beta?
I'm working on another Slayers fanfic. I have a love triangle thing going Xellos-Lina-Zelgadis, but I'm not really sure if it's turning out right. I have Xellos/Lina action going on pretty early, but a lot of more emotional internal stuff with Lina/Zelgadis. Then Zelgadis saw Lina and Xellos kissing, and Lina got tired of trying to explain to Zel that she's not in love with Xellos or Gourry and kissed him, and then Xellos gets angry. And it's turning rather messy for something that should have lots of humor in it. As much as I want to have Lina and Zel get kissy, it makes it get darker, which wasn't my intention, but the only way I can see it going at this point. Obviously, by the end of it, Lina and Zel will be together and Xellos trying to figure out what to do to break them up and get rid of a suddenly very interested Amelia (which WILL be funny).
Anyhow, I've got over 20 pages written so far. I'm trying to pace it similarly to the anime so that it takes a while to resolve the central arc-- Will Lina get the mysterious mazoku amulet before the other treasure hunters? Why does Xellos hint that Zelgadis is in danger from the other adventurers? Would Lina really accept the power of a mazoku into herself? Has Gourry finally figured out what a fiancee is?(That's actually the first question answered.)
Characters are Lina, Gourry, Zelgadis, Xellos, Amelia, Sylphiel, and an amazing cast of returning minor characters. ;) How about it?
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